Great movement and funny progression into madness. The animation was impressive and the style was consistent. Sound was alright, maybe a bit more work on the cop, but acceptable. Bravo.
Great movement and funny progression into madness. The animation was impressive and the style was consistent. Sound was alright, maybe a bit more work on the cop, but acceptable. Bravo.
I dig the facts, however they are slightly too fast. To remedy this in the future, get the dumbest/least literate person you know to read them and time it. Not joking. Also it's species, but I'm sure you have heard that one already. Otherwise good sound effects and decent visuals. That there's no variation throughout gets a bit boring, but not bad.
The reason why it's so fast is because the soundtrack was only 2 and a half minutes, so I couldn't make the video too long, or else it would have went quiet too fast. BUT, that's what the PAUSE button is for!! You can go back to certain places of the video, so okay.
I did do different animations for each slide, but dude, I started this only about a week before the due date. Researching the facts also took a lot of time. I do wish there was a bit more variation though, but it's the facts that matter to me. Thank you very much for commenting on this video! Hope you see my other animations!
Consistent style and clever segues. I'm going from the bottom to the top for initial round videos and this is so far my favorite. Plus I laughed heartily at the vending machine at the end. I voted high, but get your 'there' s correct. Harvard found a book in THEIR library. Overall Bravo!
Noted. :)
quite obviously not teen, great animation but poor pacing and while the theme is appropriate, it isn't for the entirety of the vid. good overall, i understand its placement on fp
Very good
Excellent effects and the music really sets the mood. The end was slightly fast for cohesion with the rest of the flash. Maybe more can be displayed to really make it clear where he ACTUALLY is.
Cohesive
Level of polish was very even across all aspects and hell sometimes bringing works to a finish gets really boring. I'd have just been down for even a slight background noise every now and then. A car or something driving by or a dog barking outside. It's a frequent thing so it wouldn't have detracted. Cringe-worthy nonetheless.
Grade A
Memorable characters, solid style, great music and I left with a desire to be able to bring down the establishment via Tetris.
You win.
I held it together until becuase
The beginning had a decent pace and then the reading was phenomenal. Very slick designing and implementing of the writer's thoughts.
More?
As stated by previous reviewers ... you have potential. Series it and make them all super short and you might have something.
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